Till something happens

Short Story zum Thema Chancen

von  NormanM.

When it began to be windy he thought she would link arms with him, but she didn ´t do it. The wind blew her beautifully long black hair behind her.
“We will survive here”, he said to her and looked in her fair and beautiful eyes.
“Yes, we will do it”, she answered a little hopelessly and unbelievingly.
Both were the only survivors, who arrived on that island after the plane crash. Now they had been staying there for three days. In a sense he could be happy about the situation to be there with her, he had been in love with her for years already, but she never had paid any regard to him. But now he got the chance to be there for her and he was willing to do everything for her. He hoped the rescue would take a long time to come, till something happened.
It started to get colder. Time to start a fire.
“I will search for some wood to start a fire”, he announced. She nodded.
“Shall I help you?”, she asked.
“No, not necessary.”
While he was picking branches on and off he looked over to her, she was sitting on a log, lost in mind. What was she thinking about? Perhaps about the rescue, maybe even about him? Finally he returned with the branches and started the fire. He saw her face lighted by the flames, her pretty face. She seemed to be cold in spite of the fire.
“Are you cold?”, he asked. “Here, get my coat on.”
“No thank you, that ´s not necessary”, she answered. But he had already removed it.
“Thank you, but I do not want you to be cold because of me”, she said.
“Don ´t worry about me.”
“But why are you doing all that for me. I have never been very kind to you.”
He looked up to the moon. It seemed as if it had a face, it appeared to nod to him. Probably a sign, a sign to tell the truth.
“Because I am fond of you...”, he started. “Even very fond, but not just that...” He slowed down. The wind stopped soughing, everything around him became silent. She regarded him.
“I love you!”, he confessed finally. “I have been in love with you for so long, but I never could tell you so. I would do everything for you.” For one moment she regarded him amazedly and silently. Suddently her lips came closer, so close till they touched his and they kissed each other passionately. The wind started to sough again, it sounded like an applauding crowd. He looked up again to the moon, who seemed to wink congratulatingly at him.
Arm in arm they fell asleep. As he heard a plane he woke up.

Anmerkung von NormanM.:

Eine Shortstory, die ich in der Oberstufe für den Englischunterricht geschrieben habe.

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 Omnahmashivaya (21.03.08)
Auf die kleinen Fehlerchen habe ich dich ja schon hingewiesen, an der Form vielleicht noch ein bisschen was ändern, dann kann man etwas interessantes daraus machen. Lg Sabine

 NormanM. meinte dazu am 21.03.08:
Einige habe ich schon verbessert, der Rest kommt noch.

Lg Norman
Selene (29)
(22.03.08)
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 NormanM. antwortete darauf am 22.03.08:
Hallo Selene,

ich freu mich, dass dir die geschichte gefällt. Die fehler muss ich noch korrigieren, auf die bin ich schon hingewiesen worden, hab es nur vergessen, sie zu verbessern. Aber laut lexikon bedeutet shall auch soll?
Ich werde demnächst öfter englische texte posten, um zu üben.

Lg Norman
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