Lost One

Gedankengedicht zum Thema Fantasie

von  DariusTech

Ancient Ones
have once grown up
on seashores grown to mountains
on seashore long time gone

Young Ones
played the winds
played the waves
did know no sorrow

Grown Ones
Had their share
Had to care

Grown Ones
Rode the winds
Rode the clouds
Saw mountains grow

One saw more
Saw shadows not yet there
Saw rainclouds on blue skyes

The others
didn't see
did'nt listen

Lost One
looked to far
found to much
had to pay


Left Ones
search the other
know its to late
don't know the fate
waiting for their world

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 ThalayaBlackwing (16.08.12)
Ancient brother
I beg you forgivness
I tried to protect
But I just destroyed

I looked too far
tried too much
saw shadows where none were
listened to whispers in the dark

I couldn't warn you
Protect you from what I became
I had no choice
I had to obey

Ancient brother
I beg you forgiveness
That I let you down
to free my soul from my corrupted body
(Kommentar korrigiert am 16.08.2012)

 DariusTech meinte dazu am 16.08.12:
Ancient sister
You bear no guilt
I only pitty your fate

You returned
to protect
You returned
to be destroyed
again

I failed you
My brother did
We did not hear the warnings
carried in the wind
Nomenklatur (63)
(17.08.12)
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 DariusTech antwortete darauf am 20.08.12:
Schwierig, dann hört es auf als Gedicht zu funktionieren, fürchte ich.
lg Darius
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