a very mediocre poem
Gedicht
von Judas
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Kalinka (41)
(30.03.23, 18:57)
(30.03.23, 18:57)
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Why that
Kalinka (41) antwortete darauf am 30.03.23 um 19:09:
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"If you're searching the lines for a point, you probably missed it, there was never anything there in the first place"
Sometimes there's nothing between the lines but on the other hand a poem can and should be open to the reader, specially a short one like this. If it made you think, if it caused a reaction, then I guess it was worth the read.
Sometimes there's nothing between the lines but on the other hand a poem can and should be open to the reader, specially a short one like this. If it made you think, if it caused a reaction, then I guess it was worth the read.
Kalinka (41) äußerte darauf am 30.03.23 um 19:26:
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I thought the " " implied that this one was a quote. Thought you caught that.
If that's your impression, then that's all fair and square. It's not the writers intention but that doesn't have to mean anything.
If that's your impression, then that's all fair and square. It's not the writers intention but that doesn't have to mean anything.
Kalinka (41) meinte dazu am 30.03.23 um 19:42:
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"When reading a poem, the intention of the author doesn't bother me. That's so High School. I focus on what it tells me" <--- good thinking.
I was simply curious why you thought it's sad because that was so far away from my intention haha
I was simply curious why you thought it's sad because that was so far away from my intention haha
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Kalinka (41) meinte dazu am 31.03.23 um 10:20:
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without sounding like a dick
or an asshole
(I really don't want to sound like an asshole)elgé Luga
How do you manage to sound like a dick inside of an asshole though? Heavy groaning and moaning?
NOW I am curious.
NOW I am curious.
